Not great

Hmm.

i smell scrotum musk

Some more constructive feedback if I may- this was conceptually lovely and your ideas made me smile- very difficult to get any play out of it- you'd have to make a few too many leaps to get there, I think, but keep coming up with ideas like these and just tweak the execution a wee bit and you will be one of the greats I'm sure! Hope this is helpful, thanks for all your grids :)