YAWN stands for Yet Another Word Nerd. My first grid here, just testing comments.

Mostly decent, but the dress section is a bit of a mess. Cocktail must precede dress to make sense – i.e. you can't say "I'm wearing a cocktail tonight" – while frock never precedes dress, and isn't a type of dress anyway! I see it's your first grid, so a good first attempt and keep trying.

Thanks for the comment Wordsworth, it’s a good point. I changed the grid, replaced cocktail.